I know we've easy on details during the love scence, but I think we are all mature enough to add a little more deatil to add some change and flavor to the writing. It is only my opinion, but I was just asking what you guys think.
Roberadamsonlover

it depends on what kind of detail ur talking about.  i don't have a problem with the way things are written now.  i prefer not to get Rated R in my writing and don't want to read it either.  and that's only my opinion.
Candygwen


I totally agree with no R rated kind of detail, but I knew before we ere able to to write the scenes while keeping it contained and innocent.
Robertadamsonlover

cool.
Candygwen